Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 7 December 2016

Narrative Plan




My Reflection

WALT write a narrative and I found it tricky to come up with the names and to write the story but in the end it got a bit easier and more understandable.
My next step is to write a better and longer narrative.

Friday, 2 December 2016

The Three Little People




My Reflection

WALT write a narrative and I found it tricky to come up with the names and to write the story but in the end it got a bit easier and more understandable.
My next step is to write a better and longer narrative.

Tuesday, 12 April 2016

Science In A Van



I am learning to write a recount.
I am so proud of being able to write about the main ideas of my recount.
It can be tricky to write in specific details.
I can help  myself  to write a recount.
The next step for me in my learning is to write a longer recount.

Monday, 21 March 2016

Past Tense Activity

Reflection
I am learning to write in the past tense.
I am proud of learning about past tense.
I found it tricky to change the words to past tense.
My buddy and my teacher can  help me in my learning.
The next step for me in my learning is to write a recount using past tense

Friday, 18 March 2016

Values Presentation


I have been learning to research a leader and summarize information that I have read about them.
I am so proud of being able to find facts and information about my leader.
It can be tricky to find facts about who we are researching.
My buddy can help me with this task.
The next step for me in my learning is to research someone else and summarize information about them.





Tuesday, 8 March 2016

Leardership Presentation



I have been learning to research a leader and summarize information that I have read about them.
I am so proud of being able to find facts and information about my leader.
It can be tricky to find facts about who we are researching.
My buddy can help me with this task.


The next step for me in my learning is to research someone else and summarize information about them.

Thursday, 3 March 2016

Year 6 Welcome Post

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Year 6 Welcome Post

Welcome to Year 6.  My name is Braxton and I am now in Room 21.  This year I am looking forward to making new friends and learning lots of things.  One of my goals for this year is to take part in more things at Elm Park School.  My responsibilities so far this year are being a Wet Day Monitor and a Digikid.  I am enjoying being part of an all boys class, learning lots of maths and being a good leader.

Wednesday, 18 November 2015

Term 4 Week 6



The Weekend

On Saturday, me and my mum went to The cat lounge in Glenfield. It takes 1 hour from the city to the cat lounge and it is New Zealand first cat cafe in history. 

When we got there we had an hour until we get to see the cats so I got a hot chocolate, then when I finished the hot chocolate I read a book about cats, and the cats in the book were so cute, then it was time to go in to see the cats.

When I went in I sore a white small kitten and it was sleeping in the sun outside so I picked it up and it was still sleeping and it was so soft in my arms, we have an hour with the cats and that is a lot of time to play with the cute cats.

Time past and it was time to go so we got out of the cute kitten area and then went home, and I had lots of fun with the cute cats and I wish I get to play with them again some time. 

Wednesday, 11 November 2015

Narrative Task


The three little ninjas.

Once upon a time there was Three Little Ninjas, they all had their own individual names, one was called Jordan he was the oldest, the next Ninja was called Jackson which was the second oldest and finally the youngest was called Jamie.  One day they moved to the Pink Ninja Forest and they built there dojo there.  One week after, they encountered The Big Fat Wolf.





My Reflection

I am learning to write a narrative.

I had to watch a video then to read some examples then think of the fairy tales that I know, next I had to complete the frame and make my story that I choose the three little pigs and then I change it into the three little ninjas and I change the big bad wolf in to the big fat wolf and the setting is instead of the forest I change it into the pink ninja forest and the three little pigs had to bulled a house out of stone, straw and bricks but now they live to together in a dojo in stead of living apart.
I thought it was hard because I didn't have time to do it and it was hard so then I gave it a try and I got far on this narrative task too.

My next step is to learn more about narratives and write my own narrative.

Monday, 9 November 2015

Term 4 Week 5

The Weekend

On Saturday me, dad my sister and Nathan R went to a fireworks display at a stadium in the North-West. It starts at 4pm-10pm but we didn't want to wait for the entertainment to start at 7:30 and the fireworks to start at 8:30 so me and Nathan R played with Mocka the cat and we played cricket with her. I was bowler and Nathan was field and Mocka was good at batting so I bowled the ball to her and she hit it and then again and again and again and then we gave up and she won the cricket world cup
and then it was time to go to the fireworks display. 
35 Mins later we were at the fireworks display so we went in to the stadium and watched the entertainment for 1 hour and it was so awesome then it was time for the fireworks.
It was dark and that is a good time for fireworks and then BANG!!! the fireworks were so loud and so colorful that I was like OH WOW THAT IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!
Then an hour later the firework display had finish and then we went home and Nathan R stayed the night for a sleepover at my house.

Friday, 31 July 2015

Learning About Explanation Writing




My Reflection

I have been learning about explanation writing. I now know that explanation writing tells about how something works. I found the quiz tricky because it was a bit hard to do but i got some right.
My next step is to write my own explanation.


Friday, 26 June 2015

My speech



My Reflection

We are learning to write speeches and we have to say 3 tips about it and it only take's 10-15 min's to writing the whole speech on your book but if you want to put it on cue card's you can an then it is time to present it.  My next step is to make it a bit longer.








Thursday, 12 February 2015

African praise poem


My Reflection

I have been leaning to write an African praise poem.

I found this work easy because it was good that I thought of all of those word's and it was fun making this 

African praise poem.

My next step is finding more interesting word's and making the poem longer.

Friday, 14 November 2014

Identifying Different Types Of Words.


My Reflection

I was practicing to identify nouns.
I found it easy because it is easy to do the nouns and playing on the computer and learning nouns.
My next step is to do more nouns.